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Monday, 7 December 2015

Keira's fabulous story...reworked and revisioned

The Underworld

The light of the phosphorescent moon weaved through the blooming cherry blossom trees. Little did anyone know, that deep in the Sakura Forest, hidden in the shadows of the beautiful  pink blooms, lay a cave. Any person or creature that enters it will be whisked off to a magical land. There is still quite a long journey wandering through the steep tunnels that become darker and  darker, until, you enter a land filled with the whooshing sounds of rivers and the pale blue skies which were lined with wispy  white clouds. The only way to escape is a magical opal found in the gleaming waters of the  Moonshine Pearl Pond but years ago it was stolen and fate has taken over….   

“Ava Cateilia, come here this instant!”screamed mum.
“Coming.”I groaned. Getting up on Mondays was terrible after being used to sleeping in during the holidays.
I scurried out the door and shoved my blue and pink Jansport bag through the car door.
The day zoomed past so fast that as I lay in bed and peered out the window at the starry night sky that night, I wondered, if maybe someone had used a machine to make time whoosh away. Soon I was in a deep sleep, at least I thought I  was.

Around me the air slowly turned a whirl of blue, pink and purple, the sound of wind echoed in my ears. I felt a tingly sensation stream through me and  I was lifted up off my spongy bed. My eyes fluttered open, I was in a very peculiar room glass bottles were tied in a bunch and tiny glowing fireflies fluttered inside them, leaves were strung together and lay on my lap, two faces of angels stared at me hovering above my face….okay, they weren’t actually angels but they were so beautiful they could pass as angels. “Hello darling,” one of the beautiful creatures whispered.
Her voice was, gentle and soft. “Kind of like a fairy,” I thought. But then I realised it couldn’t be possible that one minute I was at home in bed and the next I was in a different dimension, where everything in sight was made out of nature.
I tried pinching myself to see if it was a dream. But to my surprise, after trying strategy after strategy, I realised that it wasn’t a dream and I wasn’t going to open my eyes to hear mum screaming “get up!” from the bottom of the staircase.
Tears were pricking in my eyes. Suddenly one of the angelic creatures spoke up again, bowing deeply, “ Your majesty, I don’t believe you told us your name.”
“Ava Cateilia” I repeated shyly.
“What a beautiful name,” the creature commented. “Well, your majesty,” she began.
“What are you and where am I and why are you calling me Your Majesty!” I interrupted. Without thinking, I started crying and buried my head in my chest.
“Don’t cry darling. It is quite overwhelming. But the reason you are here, is because you were chosen to save our people and the creatures that live here in the Underworld.
“Well you must have made a mistake, because I  don’t know anything about this world and I want to go home.”
The creature glanced at me gloomily, “I’m afraid there is no possible way to escape from here, unless the missing opal is found.”
That is when the excitement of the adventure began.

From behind the golden hair of the creature, appeared a tiny fairy and as she fluttered towards me I could now see that she was clothed in a magenta, rose petal dress that swiftly swung around her knees. Her wavy brunette hair, that rested on her shoulders, was held back with pint-size flowers.
“Welcome,Your Majesty,” she whispered, curtseying.
“Who are you, must I ask?” I questioned.
“Petunia Rose,” she whispered in a high tone, “I am your Royal Guardian. Your Highness will be wanting a grand tour I suppose?”
“Of course,” I was bursting with excitement. I didn’t want to seem impolite, so I showed little more than a smile.
The little fairy let out a shrill whistle. In no more than a second, a sparrow’s head came into view, peering through the window. It was quite an unusual sparrow. From the top of it’s head to the border-line of it’s neck was pale blue and slung on it’s back was a saddle. “This is Oceania,” announced Petunia, “She will be guiding us if we manage to get lost.”

In a few minutes, we were flying through a forest. The refreshing aroma of pine was carried on the breeze. Soon Petunia, Oceania and I came to a clearing. I heard the crashing of a waterfall and suddenly a glorious sight met our eyes. Glistening water slipped through the gaps in between the row of rocks along the edge of the stream. Below, the slick water crashed on a pond that was filled to the rim. Water lilies bobbed on the surface and were nudged by the shimmering fish and creatures that were living in a whole other world beneath the blue sheet of liquid.

Petunia hummed a merry tune. To my surprise, Oceania shot forward in such speed that I was jolted and nearly flung off into the thick, glossy, water that spilled out below me.
Oceania slowed down as if she suddenly had noticed that I wasn’t used to being on a massive sparrow and glided straight for the waterfall. I yelled in alarm but my voice was muffled by the vibration of the water.

My eyes were adjusting to the darkness of the rocky cave, and as my vision came back to me, It seemed as if the cavern expanded every second that ticked by. In just a minute, the tunnels of the cave seemed to trail on forever. “Mistress Lannia,” Petunia’s voice echoed off the uneven walls. A small light appeared glowing in the distance and streamed through one of the narrow tunnels. A deep purring sound grew and soon a snow tiger cub pounced out of the shadows alongside a beautiful enchantress. She wore a crimson-silk dress. Her skin was a pale shade of beige and her brown, sandy coloured braid looped over her shoulder. “I see that you have brought a visitor. Goodness, doesn’t she look quite like  Emily Cateilia?” she questioned.
Silence swept across the cavern. Petunia and the enchantress stared at each other with beaming smiles spread across their faces.

My feet were lifted off the ground and gradually I vanished into thin air. I glanced down and gasped. I got the shock of my life as I saw a white coat of fur patterned with black stripes belonging to the snow tiger cub pet of the enchantress. I could hear the buzz of Petunia’s wings above me and noticed that we were riding through a cherry blossom forest. I seemed familiar, yet I couldn’t remember where I had seen it.
Petunia sweet voice sounded in my ears, “ You recognise this place don’t you?”
I nodded in reply. The ground was covered in snow and in the centre of the fluorescent flowers was a cave. Not any ordinary cave. A magical one. Anyone could tell, by the way it shimmered in the reach of the sun’s outstretched rays.
Petunia pressed her fingers to her lips. I crept inside the cavern and my eyes widened. Boldly standing in the middle was a golden tree. Powdered glitter seeped out of the trunk and scattered into the sand it’s roots were coated in. As I peered at the glitter floating swiftly to the ground, a ring of smoke puffed out from behind the tree.

Monday, 16 November 2015

A budding writer

This term we have adopted a new set of guidelines for writing called the 6+1 traits of writing. Room 25 have taken an idea, of their choice,  and then broken that idea down into a plan. They have then spent the last few weeks developing their idea and getting buddy feedback and feed forward.

This week we have been assessing the pieces of writing for how well the ideas have been developed using a student friendly rubric.

Throughout the process, one piece of writing really shone.

Room 25 are now really encouraging Keira Binns to continue to write her story. We fell in love with it from the beginning and all of us want to be able to read on and hear more.

I'm attaching Keira's story here so that you too can be blown away by the beautiful way Keira has begun to tell her tale.

Please be aware, that at this stage we have not fully edited the piece. Overlook any spelling mistakes and grammatical errors and allow yourself to be totally wowed by the words of this fantastic author.


The Underworld

The light of the phosphorescent moon weaved through the blooming cherry blossom trees. Little did anyone know, that deep in the Sakura Forest, hidden in the shadows of the beautiful  pink blooms, lay a cave. Any person or creature that enters it will be whisked off to a magical land. There is still quite a long journey wandering through the steep tunnels that become darker and  darker, until, you enter a land filled with the whooshing sounds of rivers and the pale blue skies which were lined with wispy  white clouds .The only way to escape is a magical opal found in the gleaming waters of the  Moonshine Pearl Pond but years ago it was stolen and fate has taken over….   

“Ava Cateilia,come here this instant!”screamed mum. “Coming”.I groaned. Getting up on Mondays was terrible after being used to sleeping in during the holidays. I scurried out the door
and shoved my blue and pink Jansport bag through the car door. The day zoomed past so fast that as I lay in bed and peered out the window at the starry night sky that night, I wondered, if maybe someone had used a machine to make time whoosh away. Soon I was in a deep sleep,at least I thought I  was.

Around me the air slowly turned a whirl of blue, pink and purple, the sound of wind echoed in my ears. I felt a tingly sensation stream through me and  I was  lifted up off my spongy bed. My eyes fluttered open, I was in a very peculiar room glass bottles were tied in a bunch and tiny glowing fireflies fluttered inside them, leaves were strung together and lay on my lap, two faces of angels stared at me hovering above my face….okay, they weren’t actually angels but they were so beautiful they could pass as an angels. “Hello darling” one of the beautiful creatures whispered. Her voice was, gentle and soft. “Kind of like a fairy” I thought. But then I realised it couldn’t be possible that one minute I was at home in bed and the next I was in a different dimension ,where everything in sight was made out of nature.I tried pinching myself to see if it was a dream,but, to my surprise after trying strategy after strategy, I realised that it wasn’t a dream and I wasn’t going to open my eyes to hear mum screaming “get up!” from the bottom of the staircase. Tears were pricking in my eyes, suddenly the one of the angelic creatures spoke up again,bowing deeply. “ Your majesty, I don’t believe you told us your name, Ava”, I replied “Ava Cateilia”I repeated shyly. “What a beautiful name” the creature commented. “Well,Your majesty” she began. “What are you and where am I and why are you calling me Your Majesty !”I interrupted, without thinking I started crying and buried my head in my chest. “Don’t cry darling, it is quite overwhelming, many before you were the same, but the reason, Princess Ava, you are here is because you were chosen to save our people and creatures that live here in The Underworld. Well you must have made a mistake because I  don’t know anything about this world and I want to go home, the creature glanced at me gloomily, i’m afraid there is no possible way to escape from here unless the missing opal is found and that is when the excitement of the adventure began.


Wednesday, 11 November 2015

Pick a path writing

I am so sorry! I thought I had posted this weeks ago. The wonderful kids from Room 12 and our class collaborated and wrote a highly entertaining mystery story which they shared at Whanau time.

Here it is...
Pick a path

Monday, 26 October 2015

Learning place value

A group had been using materials to see how they could use Place value to solve subtraction problems. Since they were filmed, the group has moved on to adding and subtracting in the hundreds.


Wednesday, 14 October 2015

Pepeha practise

During Te Reo today we were all practising our personalised pepeha.

Here is the template to use and adapt to suit...

Tena Koutou

Ko Pukematakea toku maunga
Ko Waitemata toku moana
Ko Western Heights toku kura
Ko _______________ toku maamaa
Ko _______________ toku paapaa

No reira


Tena koutou, tena koutou, tena koutou katoa

Tuesday, 13 October 2015

Reciprocal reading with green group

After a term of training to use reciprocal reading green group are nailing it. Each time, different people are in charge of different roles, the students discuss the text and investigate the deeper meaning behind the text.

Here are a few short video's that demonstrate some of the roles. Sadly the sound quality is not great but the learning is fantastic!




Monday, 12 October 2015

Welcome back to Term 4

It's great to see you all back, looking happy and relaxed. I'm so pleased to be back with you all.

This term is going to be a crazy term with so much happening, sometimes it'll be challenging to try to keep up!

We've started athletics today and the weather looks like we will be able to get out and do it more often, so make sure that Tuesdays are a shorts and t-shirt day. It's great to be able to get outside and get some fresh air.

We're busy revising all our knowledge and strategies for Maths and need to make sure that we have our basic facts nailed this term.

Writing is exciting as we're starting a new programme which gives each of us more choice and ownership as to what we write about. This will also link in really well with the Daily 5 reading which is running more smoothly with a few of the groups getting to grips with reciprocal reading.

With the sunnier evenings, it's harder to get to bed and sleep but we're all going to need to rest up. Let's finish this term with a bang :)


Thursday, 24 September 2015

Term 3 reflection

It's quickly come to that time again. The last day of term three. I can't believe it has gone so quickly. We have fit in a lot this term and there is much to reflect on.

Here are some of our reflections.

I have had a wonderful experience during term three because of rugby. We got so far in the tournament and I managed to stay at camp for three days and two nights without my parents. My writing has improved and I have become neater. I'm starting to learn my fractions. I am starting to make more friends now and I'm controlling my anger a lot more. I used to really struggle in class but I'm not struggling as much anymore so I'm getting smarter. I am starting to work with people more often instead of not working with them and then failing. My reading is improving because I'm reading more at home and read by myself now too.

Brooklyn

My highlight for term three was camp because it was really exhilarating. We got to learn new ways to work as a team. In rugby, we won our first two tournaments and ended up being the second best in Auckland. Football was really outstanding and the Motuhake show was really touching. I enjoyed making the Canva posters as it was something new for me to try out and also because we could do one of our memories of camp. I'm still learning to give the speaker full attention and I'm still working on ordering improper fractions.

Anare

I think camp was my highlight for term three because it helped me with teamwork and it had some interesting activities and I had some exquisite achievements from it. I think it was pretty fun at camp as everyone got together as a family and we had lots of fun. I still think I need to learn about listening and thinking because I'm still impulsive and I need to learn from my mistakes when I do something wrong. I am proud of the reports that I write because i'm putting information into my writing but i'm also using my imagination and putting little touches into it so it makes it interesting.

Braxton

I think I've completed my writing goal because I've shortened more stories but added in more descriptive words that have made them more interesting. I like writing.

Victoria

I think that this year was quite fun and we got to do lots of activities and trips. The best trip was camp because I had two nights away from my brother which was very peaceful. The activities were incredible, even though I did get scared of some of them, I gave it a go and that's the main thing.

Kairyn

I have managed to complete my basic facts learning and I'm not onto the grid. Also I know some of my fractions. I'm still learning them.

Pearl

Wednesday, 26 August 2015

It's countdown time

One full day of school until camp and the excitement just keeps building. Rooms 24 and 25 have been researching Carey Park and the main habits of the mind that we practise at camp, working interdependently and taking responsible risks.

Today in the camp books there is a list of all of the final bits that need to be brought to school for Monday. Please go over this carefully and if there are any questions ask away.

Roll on Monday, with beautiful sunny warm weather!

Wednesday, 12 August 2015

Soccer

So far we've had 3 soccer lessons and each has been amazing. We have learnt how to dribble, stop, u turn and to head for open space.

We've had to work as individuals and then work efficiently as teams.

For some of us, the skills shown to us have come relatively easy. For some of us it's been tricky and frustrating, but through everything we've smiled, laughed and had fun.





Soccer training

Here are some of the soccer skills that we have been working on recently...




Monday, 3 August 2015

Crop circles

Yesterday we read an article on Kiwi kids news about crop circles. We discussed whether they could be man-made and if so how could this be achieved overnight. We looked at how crop circles complimented our studies on geometry and our current art project.

Room 25, a challenge! Find out as much as you can about other crop circles and whether anyone has ever been able to find if they were made by man.

Post as many articles as you can here!

Thursday, 23 July 2015

Snapshots of emotions

The challenge. In groups of five, accurately depict an emotion in a freeze frame. The rest of the class needs to be able to guess the emotion.

The results....













The learning pit

Yesterday,we looked at the learning pit and discussed situations when we were in the pit. This led to a piece of writing that will be added to our walls next week.


Then today we brainstormed what it meant to be confident. The discussion around what confidence actually looked like was very enlightening.

Tuesday, 14 July 2015

Happy holidays everyone

I really hope you're all enjoying the holidays. I'm looking forward to catching up with you all soon.

W're going to use a website called Newsela this term as well as Kiwikids news to stay in touch with what is happening out there in the world.

When you can look up https://newsela.com and sign in as a student. Your code is  

See you all Monday!

Wednesday, 17 June 2015

Student led conferences

Thank you to all the lovely families who I met last night and who I will also meet up with agin tonight. I have been so proud of how all the students have taken ownership of their learning and of how they have spoken about it.

If anyone was unable to make the times available please let me know and we can make sure that we book another time in before the end of this term.

Thursday, 4 June 2015

Our Friday uptown funk


Uptown funk

We had a chance to try out some dance moves this week with a student who came in to teach us. This was one of the songs we really enjoyed.

If we really really learn the moves the next video we make will be even better.....

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N-X0q40CcMU

Tuesday, 2 June 2015

Kid Nation

To help with our inquiry we have been watching segments from a show called Kid nation. This show highlights how difficult it is to get a country/ town or island up and running efficiently.

It is worth watching as many of the issues that the children go through are issues that we would face.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Gu1bly7YhAs&index=1&list=PLIGq5neIYcWq8u3vNIQFA1ZUAEDuSSVkM

Wednesday, 27 May 2015

Senior block officially opened

Yesterday was the dawn ceremony in which our senior block was officially blessed and opened. We were lucky to have Whaea Trish and her father leading the ceremony. Kapa haka students and school councillors also attended.

The new block has been named Nga Rau o te Miro.

On another positive note Room 24 and 25 have had our walls completely covered in Vertiface. The new colour scheme and layout has made a huge difference. To families that haven't been up to see it yet, please come and visit us. It is amazing.

Our new Waiata which corresponds to the name of the building is....

Te kai o te Miro

Te Manu (echo)
E kai ana (echo)
I te Miro
Nona te ngahere
Nona te ngahere

Te Manu (echo)
K Kai ana (echo)
I te matauranga
Nona te ao
Nona te ao
Nona te ao

Which translates to the bird that eats from the Miro tree, will never go hungry, and rules the forest.
The bird who eats from the tree of knowledge rules the world.

Wednesday, 20 May 2015

Woohoo, ice skating was awesome!!!!!

A few words from the participants.

Ice skating was today. I wore skating boots, gloves and a green shirt. I was terrified at the beginning because I thought I was going to be really hurt. But soon enough I got confident enough to let go of the edge. I fell over a lot and I also crashed into people but it was still fun, especially with the bubbles and the music. I loved it. I was soon like a professional. Victoria

We had to wear gloves. We popped bubbles. Marco

I had a good time with Georgia teaching us. It was fun. I like ice skating. It got me excited. It's like I want to do it at home but I can't because there's no ice. I got the hang of it. I skated round the middle. When I got the hang of it I let go of the wall. There were people falling down. It felt like I didn't want to do it but now I am better at it. Tatiana

For me it was awesome but it can be hard. Some people helped all of us. I thought it was easy but no, it was not. Aryan

I found it hard but it was also fun. I have never been ice skating. Arman

I fell over a lot but I enjoyed every minute of our time in the ring. I was zooming past everyone but then I would fall over and hurt myself but I would get up and keep trying anyway. Jessica and Bianca

It has been the funnest time I have had in a long time. When I got on it was the hardest thing to do but I got used to it and it got really easy. Diya

Lots of people got hurt doing ice skating. It was the funniest at the end when the girls were getting off and Eva kept falling over. Ryan

I loved the experience but it had its down sides like when people crashed and got hurt. Otherwise it was really fun. I realised that the ice was actually made out of plastic and wax. Kairyn

The plastic was not slippery at all. The lady that helped me was nice. It felt weird because it was not real ice. Eva

I enjoyed ice skating. It was a fun and exciting thing to do. I did not want to leave. Keira-Lee

Ice skating was fun but it hurt when I fell over. When it was time to go I didn't want to go. Sariah

I enjoyed it. Sara

What I liked about ice skating was that I had to try not to fall. I kept on falling over. That was the best part. Brooklyn

It was my third time doing ice skating. It was really fun because there were bubbles and people falling over. Alex

























Running a country

We have recently begun a new inquiry unit, learning about what we would need to do to run a country of our own.

After some discussion about what we needed to know, we've split up into small groups to research a component we selected.

Some of us are looking at government, taxes/ money, building and waste, transport, water sources, food sources and prisons and laws.

The first step was working out what knowledge we already had and then we decided what we still needed to know.

Stay tuned for more updates on our progress.